Bittersweet


Inspiration

Once a upon a time, in August 2002, I wrote my first Jason and Elizabeth story called Deserving. And then I decided to rewrite in the most asinine fashion–it became The Sisters and has sat on this site for many many years gathering dust while I stared at it, wishing it were a person I could punch. I know I’m usually pretty hard on my older stuff, but this particular piece is particularly putrid and I’ve known it since the beginning.

I’ve always had a yen to go back to the summer of 2002 before the Jason and Elizabeth storyline went off the rails, before Brenda’s return decimated all the other storylines, before Courtney turned into whatever the hell they decided she was going to be. So really, my inspiration comes from just wanting to fix the worst rewrite I ever did. I actually don’t even have the original version of Deserving, which makes me sad. Pieces of it survived into The Sisters: Sweet Revenge, but not the good pieces–if those ever existed. I just lifted scenes rather than attempting to actually rewrite it. I can’t…understand what I did back then.

Timeline

So in this rewrite, rather than simply returning to Summer 2002, I’m actually going back much further. After roughly about December 2001 and the Liz and Lucky wedding that never was, I’m rewriting the first half of 2002. Here are the major changes and the basic story set up for the opening.

For the most part, the months between December 2001-April 2002 will be filled in during the first few chapters as backstory so I won’t harp too much on those changes.  I did tweak the way Sonny and Carly’s divorce happened. Carly did her betrayal stuff in April 2001, and she and Sonny separated that summer. Their divorce was final in the fall of 2001, the two of them have mostly gone their separate ways.

We start in April 2002. Christ, I was still in high school then. Wow.  Let’s not even discuss that. As I mentioned, I’ve moved the timeline back to late 2001 — Lucky and Elizabeth didn’t get married, but Gia also broke up with Nikolas, annoyed with it all. Sonny didn’t adopt Michael, but still put AJ on a meat hook. Courtney showed up, married AJ who was disowned by the Quartermaines, etc. Other than that, I think most of it speaks for itself.

A note on Courtney: She is going to be a major character in this story. I’ve taken her back to the very beginning — the girl I used to like quite a lot in the beginning. A bit naive, sweet, and believes the best in AJ. I hope you guys will give her a chance.


Media

Only song not available on Spotify is Corey Taylor’s Bother, which I will upload later.


Characters

elizabeth2002 jason2002 sonny2002 gia
bobbie2002 courtney zander michael_child
edward aj lucky_jy emily_amber
luis lucas_cj alan  sarah
nikolas_coltin

Chapters

Comments

  • Since this is the first I’ve seen you mention her and she’s on my mind, I have to ask: do you ever plan to include Brenda in one of your stories?

    You see, I just watched the Sonny/Brenda/Jax storyline from the 90s on YouTube and I now have a burning desire for Brax’s happily ever after, at least as much for Jax and Brenda’s sakes as to slate my reinvigorated loathing of Sonny. I realize Brax probably doesn’t have much a place in Damaged (though I would LOVE it) but maybe in Bittersweet?

    Of course, I’ll love whatever you write regardless but, like I said, I’ve never known you to mention Brenda before so I thought I’d make the pitch.

    Thanks,
    Eternal

    According to EternalLiason on June 18, 2016